Szeretlek, szeretlek, szeretlek,
egész nap kutatlak, kereslek,
egész nap sírok a testedért,
szomorú kedves a kedvesért,
egész nap csókolom testedet,
csókolom minden percedet.
Minden percedet csókolom,
nem múlik ízed az ajkamon,
csókolom a földet, ahol jársz,
csókolom a percet, mikor vársz,
messziről kutatlak, kereslek,
szeretlek, szeretlek, szeretlek.
This is my favourite poem in the whole world. It is so unbelievable heartfelt.
I particularly like the way the first line of the second stanza
expresses the same concept as the last line of the first stanza, but with different
emphasis.
I also like the rhyme scheme: AA BB CC DD EE AA. My favoute rhymes of the poem are
jársz and vársz.
Finally it's the metre that I like.
Every line is 9 syllables except the two contrasting expressions mentioned above.
I think this is another reason why I am drawn to these two lines, as their difference (8 versus the regular 9)
in metre sets them apart.
There is a girl about whom I wish I could feel this way. You know who she is.
What do you think of this poem? Contact me to tell me.